It is argued that the increasing number of patients in the hospitals could be treated with modern medicines ,
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a number of individuals think that
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alternative medicines could help . It is agreed the fact that the acupuncture as well as the other technics used to improve the general health , demonstrated positive results over time .
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with , some persons suffering from a long term health problem, realise that the treatment followed for a long period of time is not responding anymore ,
the alternative medicines could be a solution to be considered .
, a private clinic in London which is specialised in alternative treatment
as chiropractic therapy
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is confirming the fact that more than 80
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of their service users
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are finding that the pain killers are not effective anymore . The therapies mentioned are in many cases the only and
hope
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the modern medication is not as effective anymore .
To continue , the
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technics approach could
present extended results for the suffering person . In some cases
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