There is no doubt that one of the most important
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for businesses is to make money.
, it is becoming common to hear people talking about how they should concentrate only on
,
of the social responsibilities that companies have or the quality of the service they offer. I believe that
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should have more presence in
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society than just make money.
It is a well-known fact that any company must make money in order to keep running in
and
be able to compete with others.
, we can´t deny that
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main reason for companies to focus on
, is because they have to cover the employee wages, the payments for the buildings or vehicles and their maintenance. It is important to understand that the key
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a successful
is having a good financial result every month.
On the other side of
argument, I believe that the owners of the companies have an important social obligation. From my point of view, one of the most significant is the way they treat their employees, they should always try to ensure their safety and never exploit them. Another thing to consider is the impact they have
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the society around them. I think that
should contribute with the local projects
as
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the environmental, the charity or the educational initiatives.
As a conclusion, it is important to realize as I mention before that good profits are the key
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a successful
,
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I strongly believe that the owners must ensure that their employees aren´t exploited.
, they should try to put the same importance
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their social obligation as they do
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their financial goals.
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