Dear Manager,
My name is Marco Milani and I am writing
epistle to grab your attention about the problems I have been facing
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two weeks with your
service. I live on Airport Road and usually takes 30 number
, which
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go to Bramalae
terminal. I have been using your
service for
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5 years, but it is very unfortunate to say that your
service is no more accurate.
of all, I want to let you know that some of the
drivers are not punctual of time and most of the time, they skip my area route. My office time is 9 AM and it takes me 20 minutes to reach there, but whenever the
is late or skip my area route, I get late to the work and
lead
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bad impact on my employee report. Another issue is with the
ticket
. The regular ticket
are $5 but sometimes the driver
$2 extra without any justification.
Not even me, most the passengers are affected due to these problems. By going late at work is affecting my profile and paying extra on regular ticket
is not worth
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all. These problems are creating daily basis issues and losing your customers who connect with your company for many years.
I would like to suggest you that kindly look into
matter and keep an eye on your daily drivers report so that your
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company may not bother the passengers.
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Sincerely,
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