To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the human being population is increasing, resources are never going to be sufficient. To solve

this

, some believe take the view that adding edible

insects

in

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the human

food

menu should be the proper approach to

this

problem.

On the other hand

, some people

who

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are in favour

to

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this

solution

but

still

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resistant to accepting it because of natural factors.

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solution

have

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more detrimental cons than pros.

Adding edible

insects

as

food

can mean fuel to the fire.

Firstly

, new diseases are originating at

the

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alarming levels through

insects

, live animal stock . To add insect is the level zero from which diseases or

virus

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gets evolved.

For instance

, the covid-19 virus primary source was a bat and the world saw a devastating pandemic.

Secondly

, it disrupts

nature

‘s plan to maintain the earth’s equilibrium.

For instance

, it disrupts the entire

food

chain designed by

nature

which can cause harmful effects in immediate future.

On the other hand

, to solve the demand-supply issue, adding

insects

into human being

food

is a direct

solution

to a problem. As

insects

are available and can be produced in gigantic wealth. But

this

step will be considered as avoiding the real issue of population increase.

Also

on the price of damaging the

nature

plan for which our upcoming generations have to bear consequences.

Moreover

, in future there will be a shortage of

insects

then

another living being will be added.

Instead

of

this

,our

solution

should be

such

that it should not damage

nature

.

To conclude, taking easy solutions for long term loss. On the whole, disadvantages are more than advantages, which can cause deep damage to the earth’s ecosystem which are not repairable.

For instance

, the world is not ready to suffer another covid-19 kind of virus. I strongly believe it should not be implemented.

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