Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many nations import

food

from other

countries

in the world. In my opinion,

this

statement has both advantage and disadvantage for the region_s import.

On the one hand, some disadvantage when country bringing

food

from outside

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begin with, importing extremely products prone to debase the

food

manufacturing market. In fact,

food

imports have been shown to reduce domestic

food

prices and domestic

food

production, which influenced the number of unemployees increase because the

food

domestic companies gradually went bankrupt.

Furthermore

, should the imported

countries

could not transport product in difficult times,

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particularly

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epidemic, they might face a large shortage of

food

.

Countries

depend on extraordinarily importing foodstuffs will lead to imagine consequence

such

as the

food

crisis was caused by the rise in

food

prices.

On the other hand

, in spite of some drawback from importing, there

are

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benefit for importing

countries

.

Firstly

, citizens can get a wider variety of foods from other nations, which make people easier asset with specialities from abroad at affordable prices.

For example

, in the supermarket where consumers might saw the different product under different brand names made in different

countries

,

therefore

, people easily choosing a variety of product in the same place without waiting time order.

Secondly

, importing

food

from the origin region will guarantee the best quality for customers and save money from manufacturing, labour cost for

this

nation. Because each country will have a natural environment suitable for the cultivation and production of specific products, helping importing

countries

can optimization choose import suitable foodstuffs

.

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In conclusion, the negative of imported

food

is not usually happen. I believe that trading

food

with other

countries

is a good opportunity for developing

countries

as well as people

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can enjoy

food

chain variety in their area.

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