Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that journalism has an indispensable role to play in many realms of

contemporary society.

Hence

, some people harbour a belief that some media which

spread excessive details of offences should be limited;

otherwise

, it may generate

counterproductive influences. I am inclined to stand with the proponents.

Initially

, the front and centre in its favour is that constant demonstrating the technique

and description of

crimes

would result in

serious

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butterfly effect. Admittedly, there is a

growing

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tendency that millennials nowadays either offend petty

crimes

frequently

such

as cyberbullying and fraud, or play bloody video games

which

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known as GTA,

instead

of abiding by

law

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or playing strategy games.

Moreover

, it seems that

bombarding the criminal

news

to people all day would make the atmosphere of the

society frustrating. According to the latest official statistics conducted by the Ministry

of the Interior in Taiwan, over 70% of citizens expressed dissatisfaction

on

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reading

and watching criminal

news

. Based on

such

compelling evidence, it appears that

some media should be dominated.

At the other end of the spectrum,

such

a vital role does journalism play in spreading

conduciviformati.considering decent

news

overspreading widely,

it

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can uplift

the morale of the society.

Besides

the aforementioned, people occasionally realize

the extent to which giving the details of the punishment on

crimes

is optimal

methodology to reduce the criminal incidence.

For instance

, potential violators would

not break the law owing to realizing and deterring the consequences. These indicate az

that the main function of newspapers and televisions is spreading positive

news

and

alleviating

crimes

.

In sum, despite the fact that broadcasting the descriptions of

crimes

has blessing and

curse, their demerits must not be ignored. It is extensively believed that some media

should be restricted and changed, in order to create a win-win situation for both

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