It is true that journalism has an indispensable role to play in many realms of
contemporary society.
, some people harbour a belief that some media which
spread excessive details of offences should be limited;
, it may generate
counterproductive influences. I am inclined to stand with the proponents.
, the front and centre in its favour is that constant demonstrating the technique
and description of
would result in
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butterfly effect. Admittedly, there is a
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tendency that millennials nowadays either offend petty
frequently
as cyberbullying and fraud, or play bloody video games
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known as GTA,
of abiding by
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or playing strategy games.
, it seems that
bombarding the criminal
to people all day would make the atmosphere of the
society frustrating. According to the latest official statistics conducted by the Ministry
of the Interior in Taiwan, over 70% of citizens expressed dissatisfaction
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reading
and watching criminal
. Based on
compelling evidence, it appears that
some media should be dominated.
At the other end of the spectrum,
a vital role does journalism play in spreading
conduciviformati.considering decent
overspreading widely,
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can uplift
the morale of the society.
the aforementioned, people occasionally realize
the extent to which giving the details of the punishment on
is optimal
methodology to reduce the criminal incidence.
, potential violators would
not break the law owing to realizing and deterring the consequences. These indicate az
that the main function of newspapers and televisions is spreading positive
and
alleviating
.
In sum, despite the fact that broadcasting the descriptions of
has blessing and
curse, their demerits must not be ignored. It is extensively believed that some media
should be restricted and changed, in order to create a win-win situation for both
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