Topic: some people think studying abroad is good. Other people think studying abroad is bad. How do you think?

At

present time

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the present time

, with the help of technology, myriad chances are provided to many students in developing countries to meet

advanced education

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the advanced education

in oversea. Most of people

have burning

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were burning
have been burnt
have been burned
were burned
have burnt
have burned

desire to study abroad with the hope of better

life

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life, although

although

they can encounter with difficulties.

Firstly

, studying in abroad becomes a dream of many individuals in

educational

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educating

society because of external influence and their perceptions. As most of liberal people have

wider scoop

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a wider scope
a wider scoop

of vision in promoting their life better, they claim that upgraded education system in foreign can improve their personal development to get

greater chance

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a greater chance

of job opportunities. The experience of self-dependence, communication and

organization

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organizational

skill that received during oversea study will be a lot of help in their career pathways.

On the other hand

, people want to go to abroad and continue their study due to increase their dignity in current social circle without thinking much about drawbacks they will be

faced

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facing

.

Language barrier

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The language barrier

and

culture

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cultural

differences are the

first

thing they will meet. The feeling of loneliness can lead to depression, anxiety and even home-sick. Because of

unfamiliar education plan

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the unfamiliar education plan

, failure

can

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can also occur

also

occurs.
All in all, studying in foreign countries not only give us large

advantage but

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advantage, but

also

serious disadvantage so

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a serious disadvantage, so
a serious disadvantage so
serious disadvantages so

we used to prepare our best before leaving our

countries

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country

.

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