Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Safety

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the major concern of the modern era. A few individuals claim that slow down the speed of

autombiles

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such

as

cars

and bikes are

the

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terrific method to decrease

in

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the number of

road

accidents, but the opponents have conflicting views. That essay will

first

discuss both

the

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views,

then

discuss my perspective about it in the subsequent paragraphs.

The proponents of the

first

view said that people it is good to decrease the speed of vehicles in order to improve the

safety

on the

road

. In

this

way,

rider

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can easily stop their

cars

or bikes before crashing

to

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any other two or

four

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four-wheeler

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wheeler

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. As the result, neither will occur any mishappening

on

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on-road

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road

nor any threat to life during riding on the vehicles. To cite an example,

Last

year, I was going to my town on my bike and at that time, there was fog in the surroundings, but I was riding my bike

not

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,not

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above the speed of

fourty

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kilo

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kilometre

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meter

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per one hour.

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, a child came into my way, but I was

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stoped my bike since of low speed.

The opponents of the

first

view claimed that there are other methods too to upgrade

road

safety

are ethier citizens should follow the traffic rules or Government should imply the

odd-even

rules for

four wheelers

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four-wheelers

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. In

this

law, one day only the

cars

who have

odd

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an odd

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number in the

last

should

allowed

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on the

road

as well as the

next

day for even number car.

Consequently

, it will lead to

less

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chances of happening any risk of life or probably reduces the possibilities of car

carshings

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crashing

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with each other.

For instance

, in the year

of

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2019, the chief minister of

delhi

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,

Mr.

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Arwind

kezriwal

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was implement

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the

odd-even

law for

cars

. After that, the

numbers

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number

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of

cars

accidents were reduced by 25% according to the data of

police

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the police

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department.

In conclusion, it is believed that

although

road

safety

will improve by the

declining

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in the speed of

motobikes

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motorbikes

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and

cars

,

but

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odd-even

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the odd-even

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rule is

more

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a more

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effective method than it.

Therefore

, it is better to establish the

odd-even

rule for improving

the

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road

safety

rather than slowing the vehicles speed.

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