An increasing number of vehicles and buildings is overwhelming so some
are being encouraged to relocate their offices to somewhere less crowded.
I tend towards the viewpoint that relocation will solve
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solution will cause some inconveniences and disadvantages for both customers and companies.
On the one hand, relocation can help the ururbanizationroblem. The shortage of jobs along with young
‘s need to pursue a career
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are the two main reasons for rural depopulation. Moving
from crowded places to rural ones will balance workforces between
and countrysides, which helps urban
not be overpopulated from migration. Another benefit of relocation some
is traffic congestion.
will tend to use public transportation
of their private cars for longer destinations to save the
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prevents car accidents after a frustrating working day when
are very tired and do not
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, moving between urban
will cause some inconveniences for
who already live in
. Changing their workplaces
probably have to change their lifestyles for young
as their daily routines. But
with families will have to move to rural
to live as a family with lower living conditions, which is not easy to give up.
like service companies will have some troubles while moving from
because most of their potential is in big
need more services compared to rural ones
as health care, restaurants, technologiefurniturefurniture.
In conclusion, it seems to me disadvantages of moving
and ruraoutweighareas will outweigh the advantages it brings due to previous reasons.
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