When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some situations, when a nation is more advanced in technology it completely wipes out old skill sets and ways of living

people

have in their life.

This

essay agrees with the

first

statement because

new

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mode of

skills

make work more simple and less

time consuming

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.

Firstly

,

skills

that are acquired through automation are easier to find and are reliable and convenient.

People

can learn new techniques and methods through

technological

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the technological
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mode of learning with just a click.

Moreover

, residents can

also

update their knowledge or expertise through

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the automative
an automative

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automative

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automotive

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mode of learning.

For example

, high school students simply learn new prowess from online learning

instead

of sitting in the class.

Secondly

, it is a

time saving

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method to learn.

People

can understand and learn any life technique from any teacher globally.

people

can sit at home and at any place and could do their work by saving much of their important

time

.

However

, traditional

skills

are only learnable in the presence of a mentor. Individuals are not that much privileged in the

skills

that are learned from

ansisters

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sisters
ancestors
and sisters

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.

For instance

, today college

assignment

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or related work are done from home. Homework

are

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submitted through websites or portal

instead

of a presence.

In conclusion,

automative

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automotive

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learning make tasks less difficult and confusing.

Furthermore

, citizens can save a massive amount of

time

through technological knowledge.

In addition

, The

ansisterial

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ministerial

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skills

must be wiped out and should never be used again in the future.

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