Women and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males to females from certain professions because of their gender?

Society

is highly influenced by the

content

shown on

media

platforms,

Such

as violent

content

which promotes hate and crime among peoples. I completely agree

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the statement about promoting violent

content

to our

society

and will be discussing

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the same in

following

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paragraphs.

To begin

with, there

are

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massive

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amount of audience

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are

intrested

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in watching thriller and crime based shows, in which mass killing and

brutual

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acts of humanity are promoted.

However

, promoting

this

kind of

content

is spreading hate and crime in

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society

leading to

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in criminal activities.

On the other hand

, criminals can

also

get ample

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ideas by

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various techniques of doing criminal

activites

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shown on

media

platforms.

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, one of the

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fell from his roof while intimating the actor of superman.

Secondly

, heroic and brutality scenes are shown

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of accelerating TRP by the

media

houses, which try to brainwash people to make them think

that is

true and real. Along with

this

,

this

will completely ruin the teenager as they tempted by showing

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lifestyle of film stars shown in films or news channels for which

media

plays a vital role to promote

this

kind of

content

on their platforms.

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students were caught by the police stealing jewellery shop because

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their favourite stars wears them.

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, crimes are increasing in

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society

and

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reason behind it is violence telecasted by the

media

. To stop

this

goverment

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should acknowledge putting some strict laws to restrict the contents.

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