Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take part-time course. Mention – Qualification and work experience -Details abut the course -How this course will help you

Dear sir,

Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health. My name is Rushi and I_m

insterated

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interested

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in your organization_s

sponsership

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sponsorship

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program.I have a degree

of

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in

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science

applicationand

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application and

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Currently I_m working as a

techer

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teacher

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in

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at

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Mount

carmel

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Carmel

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school.

Let me explain my situation. I_m planning to apply

in

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for

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one

part time

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part-time

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history course. But

fees

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the fees

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of

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for

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this

course is very high and I don_t have much amount of money for it. Actually one of my

friend

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friends

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told me about your organization and his name is Mr

devang

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diving

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.

Would you kindly accept my application

.

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?

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Because

this

course is very important for my future growth. After finishing it, I will be able to open my own classes and I can

also

apply

in

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to

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any university as a

hostory

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history

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faculty.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

RUSHI

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