Write a letter to your colleague from another department asking him/her to give presentation at a conference. In your letter say : 1. What is the conference about 2. Why do you want him/her to give the presentation 3. What arrangements will you have to make

Dear Mr Agrawal,

I am from the human resource department of your organization and I am writing

this

letter to request you to share your experience through a presentation on

Sale

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Cycle to our budding talent pool at the upcoming conference on 13th November

,

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2020 at the Mirador Hotel.

The theme of the conference is Team Development with a focus on the various requisites of a successful organization. Since

sales

is a crucial part of our firm, we would require someone from the

Sales

department to present the overall

sales

cycle.

Like all other departments, the head of the department has been asked to present the module. Since

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you head the national

sales

, we request you to share your pathways and views on the company

sales

culture.

I would

therefore

request you to kindly confirm your availability for the same so that we can

accordingly

have your presentation slot booked in the conference. We

also

need your high-resolution professional photograph to display

at

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the main screen of the event and

also

at all the collaterals.

We look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Sweta Singh

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