Dear Mr Agrawal,
I am from the human resource department of your organization and I am writing
letter to request you to share your experience through a presentation on
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Cycle to our budding talent pool at the upcoming conference on 13th November
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2020 at the Mirador Hotel.
The theme of the conference is Team Development with a focus on the various requisites of a successful organization. Since
is a crucial part of our firm, we would require someone from the
department to present the overall
cycle.
Like all other departments, the head of the department has been asked to present the module. Since
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you head the national
, we request you to share your pathways and views on the company
culture.
I would
request you to kindly confirm your availability for the same so that we can
have your presentation slot booked in the conference. We
need your high-resolution professional photograph to display
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the main screen of the event and
at all the collaterals.
We look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Sweta Singh
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