Mobile phones and computers are ubiquitous these days. Residing in one corner of the world we get to know what is happening on the other end . And it is possible through our modern
technologies. Though the advancement in technology appears to be a boon, we need to watch out for the potholes. I will discuss the merits and demerits of our seemingly increased
to
in the following paragraphs.
The
has consumed most of us. We are privileged people to have
to everything by a press of a button. Live news, daily weather forecast, political updates are some examples of technological advancement that has impacted us in a positive way. Any or most of these facilities were not available in the olden days. People had to wait a day or two for newspapers to reach their homes. The
has
created an impact in the education field. Students are able to see their scores and grades online
of visiting their college or university. Graduates are able to apply and prepare for their jobs online and can avoid visiting the libraries for reference books.
Even though we can argue that increased
to
has mitigated our problems and made our lives easier, it is imperative to know the same has affected lives gravely.Extended connection with information has made personal
easily available to the attackers. Attackers impersonate themselves as a different person to get
to the victim_s bank details and use it to steal money,once the details are obtained. It is said that nearly 30% of crimes recorded by
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fall under
breach, morphing and misuse of personal
.
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that bank frauds involved in phishing, password stealing, cyberbullying has
been encountered enormously these days
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To conclude, I feel though how much ever it excites us to live in a world of magic, the dark side of the
is detrimental. It is always better to take precautions, protect our private
and be safe than to complain.
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