Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the question: Sports and games create disturbance in students_ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As students_ schoolings become increasingly concerned

by

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with


parents

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Parents

and teachers in the current context, factors influencing

this

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This

academic progress

are

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is

inevitably open to debate.
Concerns surface as some people reckon that recreational

activities

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Activities

such

as sports and video games render the students_

ability

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Ability

to entirely concentrate on their lessons. From my point

of

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Of

view, I partly disagree with

this

notion as there are several

exceptions

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Exceptions

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were

partaking in leisure activities proves to be

fruitful

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Fruitful

to the furtherance of one_s studies.
One the one hand, it is true that engaging in the

aforementioned

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Aforementioned

activities may exert significantly negative

impacts

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Impacts

on the students_ lives. To commence with,

this

would

lead

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Lead

to a decrease in the

time

utilized for their

studyings

reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standings

at

school

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School

. As a matter of fact, students who spend a lengthy of

time

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Time

playing soccer or sitting in front a

computer_s

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computer

screen

might

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Might

find it difficult to make room for their learnings,

thus


leaving

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Leaving

them with no

time

to fully absorb the past lessons and

prepare

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Prepare

for forthcoming ones.

Additionally

, it holds true that

the

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The

students_ health

do not have

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does not have

the capability to cope with the

strenuous

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Strenuous

schedule of excessive load of events, owing to the

fact

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The fact
Fact
A fact

that they do not possess enough strength to withstand the

tiredness

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Tiredness

and exhaustion ensuing from those recreational

activities

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Activities

.

Consequently

,

this

weariness, in every likelihood,

may

the month following April and preceding June
May

lead to lack of concentration and,

therefore

, do discharge

to

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To

overall quality

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the overall quality

of

studyings

reading carefully with intent to remember
studying

in the long run.

On the other hand

, it is my contention that while sports and

games

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Games

do prove detrimental to students_ school life, they can

be

a light strong brittle grey toxic bivalent metallic element
Be

advantageous if effectively implemented. The problems

arisen

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Arisen

from those activities are not always what type of sports

or

introduces an alternative
Or

genre of the games they play, rather it is the frequency they

immerse

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Immerse

themselves in them. Too much

time

can lead to

inability

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Inability

to focus on lessons while the contrary might result in

one_s

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One_s

unsatisfactory life; for

this

reason, a sufficient amount

of

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Of

time

should be

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable

.

This

would facilitate

their

objective case of they
them


studying_s

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Studying_s

process at school by acting as a source of incentive

and

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And

also

a means of relaxation.

Furthermore

, the

disappearance

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The disappearance
Disappearance

of these activities would ultimately lead to

deleterious

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Deleterious

effects. Being bereft of what is an

indispensable

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indispensability


part

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Part

of their lives, students may experience anxiety and lack of

willingness

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Willing
Willingness

to do anything, particularly studying. In

this


instance

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Instance

,

such

phenomenon would only rub salt into the

wound

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Wound

.
All things considered, I am inclined to believe that a well-

spent

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Spent

time

on sports and games for students is of

best solution

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the best solution


to

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For
To
With

a successful academic

studyings

reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standings

.

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