Now a day, advertising is a very common feature of all our daily media. Despite some obvious advantages of
trend, I would
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discuss both advantages and disadvantages of advertising.
On the one hand, there are a number of advantages when manufacturers introduce
. The
benefit of advertising is that customers can have a better shopping choice. The reason for
is that advertising helps them get a lot of information about different
in the market. Another benefit is that because advertising is so important, it creates many opportunities for manufacturers to find customers.
, currently due to the Covid-19 epidemic, agricultural
are sold through advertising to people to buy goods to help.
helps farmers not to suffer economic loss.
,
trend
causes several problems.
, when
quality is not always as advertised. Some cases take advantage of famous people to promote
that create
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for customers.
, the information given in the advertisement is not true to the actual
, causing buyers to lose faith in the advertisement.
, if the advertising program for a
is too much, it will cost a lot of money,
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will increase the price of the
, affecting the interests of consumers.
, every
of advertising on television costs an average of 10 million VND, it can increase many times in the golden hours associated with sports events.
In conclusion,
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industry brings a
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of benefits to manufacturers, it
has some negative influence on consumers.
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