You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: • explain your position • apologies and offer to come on another day or later the same day. • ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Admission Tutor,

I am writing to

apologies

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for the

interview

which has scheduled on coming Tuesday 20th March 2019 at 10 AM in the morning regarding choosing study course in your renowned

collage

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. I am really thankful to you for scheduling

this

meeting

however

, I am not able to attend the meeting due to some personal work which is unavoidable. My uncle is hospitalized and

in

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20th

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the 20th

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he will undergo a minor surgery at 9:30 AM and I have to present there for taking all the paper works and other

hospital related

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activities. I am really very sorry for

this

unavoidable situation.

The course meeting/

interview

is very much important for me and I am not wanting to waste it, so I am asking is there any way you can reschedule it to another

day

or later on that

day

? I hope my work will be

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up by 11:30 AM so if you reschedule it after 12 on the same

day

then

I can able to attend that. If you want to schedule it on another

day

that

also

works fine for me. I will really appreciate if you reschedule the meeting or change the timing based on your available schedule.

One

last

thing, just for curiosity, can you please tell me how long the

interview

will

last

approximately or is there any test I have to give during the

interview

process? I am asking

this

because

this

interview

is related to collage course selection, so I am bit curious.

Finally

, I am really very sorry for

this

and I hope you will forgive my unavoidable circumstances and allow me a new

interview

date.

Yours Sincerely.

Subhrajyoti Das.

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