Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the “Marina cruise” I recently went with our company, I travelled on Victoria 111 from the 1st to 15th of December, and I was shocked by the standard of
and accommodation Which they order on
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.
with, I was disgusted by the size and condition of the cabin. It was very small and dirty unlike the _large deluxe cabin_ that your advertisement promises.
What is more, there is no private bathroom in the cabin. I was appalled to find that I had to share the bathroom with several passengers, in spite of that fact I specifically requested that I need a private bathroom when I booked the trip
To make matter worse, the
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was very unsatisfactory.
your advertisement promises a
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restaurant with gourmet
, the
was
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very poor standard.
I feel I am entitled to a full refund for the cost of
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and a write
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apology to provide
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misinformation contain in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding
information as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Bhuvanesh
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