You live in a room in college which shared with another student.However,there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accomodation officer at thee college In this letter, Describe your situation Explain your problems and why it_s difficult to work Say what kind of accomodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir or Ma,
I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the situation am presently facing in my current

accomodation

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me,

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my

roommate

is really making me

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find it difficult to attend to my studies.I hope you will consider my situation?
Let me explain my situation.My

roommate

is a very social person and keeps a lot of friends.Most time his friends are in the room, making noise and

also

playing incessantly loud music and these had made it impossible for me to sleep.

Also

, my

roommate

level of hygiene is terrible and

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me to

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less time for my studies because I spend more time cleaning up his mess.
Would you be kind enough to transfer me or my roomie to another room?

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don_t have a preference for a particular type of accommodation but would like to live with someone

that is

more quiet and considerate and

also

have a better level of hygiene than my present

roommate

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Thanks for your consideration.

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faithfully
Tumi

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