Dear Sir
I am writing
letter to inform you about the feedbacks, which I got from the participants, regarding the company meeting, which took place at your hotel.
of all, we would like to thank you for your service, which was friendly and if someone needed any help you were always there to assist.
There are various things that the participants liked and they cannot stop talking about it: the hotel was very clean and well decorated.
, the waiters were very polite and they served us with great respect and passion.
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the negative side, the one thing that most people did not like was the lunch food, because it was a bit old fashioned and contained lots of oil. The fish and beef dishes were tasteless with overcooked meat, which no one enjoyed.
, most of the vegetable dishes were not cooked thoroughly, but the taste was acceptable.
, the participants did like the dessert, especially, the pudding.
I would like to give two suggestions about how the food can be improved.
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you should consider hiring experienced chefs who know about
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modern cuisines and
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flavours.
, the menu should contain more types of dishes that are famous in our country.
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faithfully,
XYZ
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