You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company_s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current working condition. While the job profile itself is fine, my family situation has become intolerable and making it almost impossible to work in

the

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India. I hope you consider my situation.

Let me explain my situation.The trouble started about three months ago when my family welcome

new

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member

my

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,my

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baby. Prior to that, everything was fine; my wife was extremely considerate .My baby stays up almost all night and cry incessantly loud. As

such

,I have not been able to sleep properly and

therefore

cannot concentrate on my work.
Would you kindly transfer me to another project

of

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offshore? I would prefer to work away from home for six

month

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months

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and

baby

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the baby

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will

also

grow wiser. I have

also

trained my new intern on my process in my absence here. But I will be available on

virtual

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platform to solve and assist any problem.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
Kavita

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